425 fightin dirty starsI couldn t wait any I had to read this story NOW And YEAHMud fightin vanilla scented baths lust alore and a HEA swoonsI didn t expect this to be a fantasy but I liked it I liked that Ethan clawed his way from the bottom and won the heart of a boy he d been admiring from afar And Fitz was a nice uy who knew how to fight AND PLAY a little dirty HOTNESS SWEETNESS and all is right with the world Most of this short story consisted of oh so dirty muddy and utterly steamy foreplay between two hot Alphasthat Resembled Something Akin Turkish Oil resembled something akin to Turkish oil Oh yeahThis hot little number was certainly a reat addition to this year s Love s Landscapes event by Ms White that I enjoyed a whole heck of a lot fans self This here little em should be a staple in your LL diet this year It s super tastyOlley White if we had a child it s last name would be Snow White btw manages to pack a huge punch into such a short story 8k words is it Seriously the sexual tension in
#this is off #is off charts I m a igantic fan of Olley White s writing style She writes sentences I could never even think of comprising the way she does I find it very uniue and incredibly refreshing Her writing is concise but has a elouent flow Music drifted in from outside the tent pipes and bells accompanied by the bawdy laughter and drunken singing of peasants allowed a day out of their usual drudgery The story is comprised of lines like this beautifully written flowing and oh so uniueI m lad view spoilerhe won the fight hide spoiler Oh yeah this was delicious The images were so clear it was almost a sho. Dear AuthorI won the tournament he came in secondI didn’t even compete to win but once he was my final opponent I had to ive all I have in me to prove to him I’m worthyI always admired him from afar but dreamed about him up close and this tournament was my chance to Red November: Inside the Secret U.S.-Soviet Submarine War get near him All I ever wanted was for him toet to know me and maybe just maybe something could A Silent Ocean Away: Colette's Dominion grow But Iuess I blew it already iven the dirty looks he sends mePhoto Description The photo is of a ma. She created and fell for Ethan FitzAdd the bonus of mud wrestlingfightingDon t worry It s sexyKnow what s even sexier Ethan And Fitz S Cleaning Off Fitz s cleaning off nice purrsAnd the hotness factor was upped with what happened afterwardsYum Fun story Great prompt Thank you to the author and the team behind it Great writing style even the mud fight
IS WRITTEN IN AN ENGAGING WAY BUT THE HISTORICALwritten in an engaging way But the historical is appy I d love to read about it And of course about Ethan and Fitz and their relationship DIRTY AND SWEET This is a nice oneI know the mud wrestling was supposed to be star of the story but their love Scene Ended Up To Be ended up to be favorite It was tender and very romantic Fitz treated Ethan well like how Ethan deserved it It was very nice to witness And I love the epilogue Sigh I love epilogues XDIf there s something I think that can be improved from this is I think a little push on the love scene and from the action scenes I find the mud fight a little lacking But it was still enjoyableA cutesy feel A Writer's Reference with Writing about Literature with 2009 MLA and 2010 APA Updates good historical short Mud wrestling I really don t know why I have to write of a review than that but for those less intuitive Hot muddy sexy men rolling around in hopes of winning the coveted prize Funny thing isthey re both winners Unexpected settingood descriptives and fun blow by blow commentating yeah I went there makes this a diverting read Short and sweet coffee break treat Favorite uote This is a tourney not a fucking mating ritual jeered one man raising his tankard in the air as others around him hooted in agreement Wow Two hot America Lost and Found: An English Boy's Wartime Adventure in the New World guys fight in the mud and then take a bath This was hot as fuck. Sked to write a story prompt inspired by a photo of their choice Authors of theroup selected a photo and prompt that spoke to them and wrote a short story This story may contain sexually explicit content and is intended for adult readers It may contain content that is disagreeable or distressing to some readers The MM Romance Group strongly recommends that each reader review the General Information section before each story for story tags as well as for content warnings.